Young Guns
What would you be doing on a regular day? Probably at school doing work. Well these kids in the eastern parts of the world are on a battle field risking their lives for nothing. Kids are currently being used as soldiers, being human mine detectors (going and walking through a battle field walking over mines which are bombs in the ground that explode when you step on them), spies, messengers, and lookouts. The youngest age recorded was seven. I don’t think the kids should be going as soldiers because they are losing their families at young ages and they don’t get enough training.
Within a month some were carrying AK-47s (assault rifles), RPGs, and M-16s. Other kids didn’t even want to go. Girls risk rape and sexual abuse. The kids are never in healthy living conditions and barely get enough food. Some kids are drawing pictures of people killing people, graphic pictures, people doing hard work, and smoking, but the bad part is they are actually doing the bad things.
Soldiers are very important to their country; but people don’t need to get ridiculous about it. Let’s make a law around the world to have a certain age at when you can join like 18. So let’s keep it normal and not like a battlefield.
By josh .w
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5 comments:
i like your first senteence first paragraph
On the last sentence in paragraph 1 needs a transition word between, going as soldiers __________ they are loosing (spelled wrong). Have all the sentences in paragraph 1. When it says, "Girls risk rape, and sexual abuse. you do not need the comma because it is two things. Good way to end paragraph 2. Ridicules is spelled wrong, its Ridiculous. Closing is unclear. It doesnt make much sense.
the comment above is by Carter M.
battlefield is one word. Also the second sentence is a fragment(it has no subject). there are a few grammical errors like AK-47s does not have an apostrophe because it is not possesive and in the last paragraph you used the wrong type of there,it should be their.
Brian M.
jOSH You did a good job with your opinion but u spelled human wrong.
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