An average of 300,000 boys and girls fight in wars every year. While children in the United States go to school and have fun in other countries such as Latin America, Africa, Asia and the Middle East region train their boys and girls to fight in war. We must stop this now before they alldie out.
Children don’t just fight; some are raped and murdered as a result of being child solider. These children severe in all aspects of the war. They have AK-47s that they use on the front lines of conflicts. They are used as human mine shields, and used as spies and to carry supplies. These are just a few of their duties. Because they are children they are more immature than their adult counterparts and have a much higher rate of casualties. From the global report on child soldiers 2001, “The use of children as soldiers is global issue requiring a global response.” In 87 countries children are recruited into government armed forces, paramilitaries, civil militias and non-state armed groups.
Think about it: do you want this to continue?
I think it is horrible how these kids are used and abused. People need to speak up and make more people aware of this situation, and force the untied nation’s Security Council to impose sanctions, or trade resonations on the governments and and armed groups that use child soldiers. If this counties what will be the future of those countries especially their children when are dying in large numbers? Think about it: you’re in Call of Duty Four but your ten. That is happening in so many countries around the world. Stop the madness now.
tylerk
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First Paragraph
Your first sentence is good. It is ment to grab attention to the reader and it does, so keep it.2nd sentence talks about the topic but on the last sentence try and add a little more to it. not just. We must stop this now. say why we should...
Second Paragraph
First senctence you need to add more details to it and elaborate.
in senctence number 2 on this paragraph severe is the wrong word choice.the last sentence is a run on sentence. say why it should not continue.
paragraph 3.
good first sentence.You went back to your opinion on the topic. untied nation’s Security Council should be capitalized, and change the first word to United. counties i think you mean continues.
Think about it: you’re in Call of Duty Four but your ten. That is happening in so many countries around the world.<--thats really good(:
last sentence is ok.
Stefany R
Great job of stating your opinion. Your call to action was a little confusing.
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