Daniel Y 1/14/10
Did you know that global warming causing CO2 levels on earth to rise dangerously? Global warming is causing small holes in our Ozone Layer and also causing the planet earth temperature to rise up. I think that we should stop using gas and get more sun light from the sun and use it in solar panels; and stop cutting down trees and forests.
I think we should use more sun light because it helps us not to use more gas, well we can still use gas but not much. Solar panels should be used because it helps use more in hot places in hot places like Hawaii, Africa and Israel with out them we use more gas and that will cause more bad problems. Our trees are very important because if we will keep cutting them down we won’t have any oxygen and than we would all die.so thats why We need to recycle!
You can help by trying not to use a lot of gas and recycle a lot and we can try writing letter to the our government or our president about the global warming issue, the global warming is a problem like a match lighting a paper and it burns; we can do this!
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2 comments:
your writing overall is pretty good, but there are some spelling mistakes that you need to fix, and some new words you should add to the second paragraph. plus, the title you came up with sounds like everything has vanished from the face of the earth. not to mention the second to last sentance in paragraph two gives off an evil aura around it, maybe you should put 'we would be in danger as well as the earth'. instead of 'WE WOULD ALL DIE!!!'
ivy c.
Good Job on your editorial! There are some spelling errors! :))))
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