Have you ever thought about someone torturing the colorful and bizarre coral reefs? Well now a day, we are causing this massacre to happen, by doing a lot of things to treat the coral reefs unfairly. I think we should all stop the things we are doing to hurt them.
Coral reefs are dying more and more, day by day, and we are the main creator of this dilemma. Tourists/divers are striking this issue because when people explore the coral by diving off boats they trample and step all over the coral. Not only that, but coral mining is also a factor of this problem because humans are breaking off whale sized pieces of coral and illegally selling it to others, while the coral suffers. Furthermore, fishing with dynamite also serves a big purpose; it’s where people use explosives to kill schools of fish and the chemicals in the pollution cover the reefs with a blanket of poison and the coral then expires. People should stop polluting and start cleaning.
Coral reefs are amazing and beautiful at the same time, and we really need to stop the things that we are doing to help these living creatures. Several others and I are encouraging you to help the reefs, by maybe even starting a blog to persuade others to stop this nightmare. Before we start participating in this disaster, we should think to ourselves, “Should I really do this”?
Krisann M.
Friday, January 15, 2010
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2 comments:
What does torturing mean? nice closing sentance.
Try a more grabbing title. On the second scentence you should state the who what when why, not just the who, what, and when. In your second paragraph you should have more words like horrendous, disaster, and terrifying. On the closing scentence the last quotation mark should go AFTER the question mark.
-KatyaC
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