Brainwashed children
Did you know in 37 different countries around the world children are being used in wars? Yes, they are called child soldiers. They get taken from their homes and go straight to war. This is affecting adults because their children get taken and the adults cannot do a thing about it. My opinion is they should stop using child soldiers because it causes children to die at a faster rate.
300,000 children are now at war and many lives have already been lost. More children die in those wars than adults because of immaturity and lack of experience. Children that are 12 and younger are forced to go to war. They are trained to kill they would even hurt their family if they had to. In Asia they use girl and boy child soldiers, approximately 32 girls die each day. The generals give kids drugs and alcohol to be brave and not scared in the wars.
I think they should stop using child soldiers. People could stop letting their kids be in wars. Teddy Roosevelt once said “Violence solves nothing”, and I think we could learn from that.
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3 comments:
The opening to your closing paragraph is weak, don't just say "Well i think countries should stop using child soldiers." Try and get some mroe etnthusiasm.
Izaiah L.
Try not to start your opinion sentence with "My opinion is..." You may need to elaborate and work a little more on your closing sentencen
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