Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Goodbye Biodiverty

Are we slowly losing Biodiversity? Biodiversity is the helping of preserving animal’s habitats, and their resources. The most common places are rain forest, coral reefs, and forests. Did you ever consider the fact that one hundred thirty seven species disappear a day. Think how many disappear a week? Biodiversity kills all living organisms. I think that we should stop thinking about ourselves and start helping. If we don’t start helping our landforms, could disappear like a wild fire.



We need to stop the destruction of biodiversity because it provides us with almost everything we have. We need to stop the destruction of biodiversity; it gives us spray to keep insects and fungi off of crops, prescription drugs, water, the air we breathe, and all of our food and water. Saving nature helps solve problems yet to be discovered. Biodiversity includes all living things, affects our economy, and our life. Human activity is causing rapid deterioration. We are building new houses everyday. No big deal right? It might not be a big deal to us but to the animals it is. We are destroying their homes and where will they go? Exactly they have nowhere to go. “It’s the forests , the oceans , the coral reefs , the algae , the insects , the animals that make up the living word around us , and which we can’t live without” , Books Yeager said! I agree with him because it’s true we can’t live without nature because it supplies everything we need to live.


I think we should stop destroying our home and start saving it .We need to stop being self-absorbed open our eyes and see what is happening to the landforms we love. We need to stop pretending we don’t see these things and take action. Everybody thinks taking action hard its not. Even if you recycle a plastic bottle you’re taking action. Some other great ways to help are to buy products not tested on animals, buy a reusable water bottle, recycle or buy “green” products. So next time you use a plastic bottle remember to recycle or to reuse.



By: Rachel S.

6 comments:

rachelk said...

rachel you forgot to indent. Also Biodiversity is a GOOD thing! Not a bad thing!!! But i love your call to action.

Anonymous said...

i loved how you explained why biodiversity is a BAD THING

keliyg said...

great first paragraph but in the last sentence you said "start helping our, landforms" there should be a comma after the landforms not after the our.

Dhvani said...

Awsome editorial Rachel. I like your vocabulary. Next time ident. Good Job!!!! :))))))

Anonymous said...

Great hook sentence. You did a really good job of explaining what biodiversity was. Awesome call to action it brings together the whole editorial.

Anjalie Salunke said...

good job of explaining biodiversity. good closing sentence.